Pitch
Title: The Revenge
Genre: Horror
Location; A” office work place”
Time Frame:
9/10 pm in the autumn of
2013
Characters
·
Ollie - The
“murderer”
·
James- Office Worker/Victim
·
Trent-
Comedy office worker
·
Ryan-
Camera Man.
Plot
outline
James and
Trent are working late at the office when they hear a knock at the door, Trent
gets up to investigate and finds no one at the door, he returns to his seat,
hears a second knock at the door ,goes to investigate again to find no one at
the door, returns to his seat, hear a third knock at door this time jams goes
to investigate, no one at door so this time leaves door open, when James turns
his back on the door, Ollie appears behind him wielding a switchblade he then
smiles and stabs James in the back. At this point Trent stumbles upon murder
scene and spots Ollie the killer, he then drops to his knees in shock.
Main camera
angles/shots
·
Bird’s eye
view
·
Shot
reverse shot
·
Point of
view shot
·
Medium
close up shot
·
Close up
shot
180 Degrees Rule shot
Match-on-Action Shot
Shot Reverse Shot
180 Degrees Rule shot
Match-on-Action Shot
Shot Reverse Shot
Sound
·
Door
opening
·
Knocks on
the door
·
Conversation
between James and Trent.
Mise-En-Scene
·
One table
·
Two chairs
·
“Murder
weapon” - Fake Switchblade
·
Door handle
Fixed and added two of the missing, required shots: 180 Degree Rule Shot and Match-on-Action shot.
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